Do you think my courtroom rap opera has any potential?

This is only part 1.

"Ladies and gentleman

Of the supposed jury

The defendant is a man

Who was driven to fury

When Mr. J. Jack Joe

Dealt him a blow

By breaking his promise

As evidence will show

"So as my first witness

I call to the stand

The defendant, your honor

Mr. Dan the Man

"Mr. Dan the Man

Could you tell us what you know

About the corn on the cob,

And your dealings with Mr. Joe?"

"Yes, Corn on the cob

It's so darn delicious

If you serve some at your house

I'll clean up all y'all dishes

Well, I spoke with the victim

At about quarter to four

On the date in question

I showed up at his door

Said "I got mashed potatoes

I can give some to you

I'll even throw in

My delicious beef stew

I just have one thing to ask

Of you in return

Could have some ears

Of the corn that I yearn?

He agreed right then

And I was giddy as a girl

I gave him a bear hug

And we did a little twirl

Do you think my courtroom rap opera has any potential?opera cd

this is just tooooo darn funny --- i love it!

and i love the sippy cup too! I have IM'd you about it -- how it cleverly matches your shirt -- no replies though -- no worries -- your rap, ROCKS! hehehe

gotta get some bumpin melodies to it, you need a Bernie Taupin for your tunes,, as you are the Elton of the lyrics! hehehehe -- I am sure they would be impressed(tongue in my cheek) hehehe -- sing it for your kids!

Do you think my courtroom rap opera has any potential?opera singer opera theater

I wanna know where I can addition for a lead part......
you are brilliant!
this is really well thought out as well as funny. you have a great imagination. can i say i knew you when?
That is good.......hmm did u come up with this?