Friday, December 4, 2009

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Rio de Janeiro is one the most spectacular cities on the planet. In Rio they have a fantastic sight called “Christ The Redeemer” on Corcovado Mountain, which gives an even higher perspective, and is the most well-known and recognized landmark of Rio. Another sight seeing is for any true football (soccer) fan, a visit to the Maracana stadium is a required pilgrimage, where you can lay your feet in the imprints of those belonging to the great pele and many other legends. Also the nightlife in Rio is like the city that throws the world’s largest party doesn’t go into hibernation after Ash Wednesday. Rio has a vibrant music and arts scene: classical music and opera, art-house cinema, laid back jazz and chorinho spots, open-air bars, over-the top Samba clubs, and throbbing night clubs. The current social climate in Rio has given the Cariocas-The Residents of the City- a unique way of living.



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Rio de Janeiro is one the most spectacular cities on the planet. There is a fantastic sight called “Christ The Redeemer” on Corcovado Mountain, which gives an even higher perspective. It is the most well-known and recognized landmark of Rio. For any true football (soccer) fan, a visit to the Maracana stadium is a required pilgrimage. There, you can lay your feet in the imprints of those belonging to the great pele and many other legends. The nightlife in Rio is like the city that throws the world’s largest party and %26lt;never sleeps%26gt;(doesn’t go into hibernation after Ash Wednesday???????). Rio has a vibrant music and arts scene, which includes classical and opera, art-house cinema, laid back jazz and chorinho spots, open-air bars, over-the top Samba clubs, and throbbing night clubs. The current social climate in Rio has given the Cariocas people a unique way of living.



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Rio de Janeiro, is one the most spectacular cities on the planet. In Rio they have a fantastic sight called “Christ The Redeemer” on Corcovado Mountain, which gives an even higher perspective, and is the most well-known and recognized landmark of Rio. Another sight worth seeing, for any true football (soccer) fan, is a visit to the Maracana stadium; a required pilgrimage where you can lay your feet in the imprints of those belonging to the great pele and many other legends. In addition, the nightlife in Rio is like the city that throws the world’s largest party and never goes into hibernation after Ash Wednesday. Rio has a vibrant music and arts scene: classical music, opera, art-house cinema, laid back jazz, chorinho spots, open-air bars, over-the top Samba clubs, and throbbing night clubs; however, the current social climate in Rio has given the Cariocas-The Residents of the City- a unique way of living.



You might also want to consider the organization of this paragraph. It is a little to wordy and has a tendency to stray off topic. I recomend you read it aloud to yourself.
My correction:



Rio de Janeiro is one of the most spectacular cities on the planet. One of Rio's most fascinating attractions is called "Christ the Redeemer", situated on Corcovado Mountain. Its location and antique beauty make it one of Rio's most well-known landmarks. For any true soccer fan, a visit to the Maracan stadium is a required pilgrimage, where you can lay your feet on the imprints of those belonging to the great Pele and many other football legends. The nightlife in Rio is (don't understand what your trying to say). Rio also boasts (put defining noun here), from classical music and opera, art-house cinema, laid back jazz and chorinho spots, open air-bars, over-the-top Samba clubs, and throbbing night clubs. Rio is by far one of the most diverse, exciting, and culturally rich cities in South America. Its laid-back theme and (adjective describing Rio) has given the Cariocas, its citizens, and unique and (adjective) lifestyle.



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